Look over your plan for a finding story. It should be in different boxes and each one will make a paragraph.
Start the first paragraph that introduces the characters and where they are.
Now read through your writing and check:
- Have you used full stops and capital letters for your sentences?
- Have you checked your spellings? Use a dictionary (there are some on the internet)
- Have you used detail to describe the characters and setting. 'He lives in a house' is not very descriptive, but 'His house was old and twisted with a huge curving chimney pot. In the middle of his bedroom was large wooden bunkbeds with three levels, painted in purple with silver flecks.'
- Enjoy your writing.
Now try paragraphs 2 and 3 where the characters find a special object and something happens.